This made me think many things. I guess I had something I wanted to send to others when I started to write a short story. So, I think it's important for the story to let itself understood. (sorry for my poor English...)
I'm starting to write about this story.
I like it very much, but I can't imagine about the story better than the author.
Many name of things and people make me confused. But I understand their feelings. I guess the author didn't have to write about detail.
Sorry, Yaro-san. I will explain in Japanese later. I will!